tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2126211012590839823.post6757078606065459244..comments2023-04-11T08:06:57.679-04:00Comments on Deb's Daydreams: Snippet Sunday from a W.I.P.Debra A. Soleshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03247380910491258121noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2126211012590839823.post-733381245227180412013-04-08T21:35:57.451-04:002013-04-08T21:35:57.451-04:00So he's humanoid, not human? Are he and the gi...So he's humanoid, not human? Are he and the girl from Earth? I like his brother's encouragement and Lee's hesitancy. Terrific snippet! Definitely an absorbing story. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04556031831830621195noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2126211012590839823.post-22030773005235088712013-04-07T19:09:06.448-04:002013-04-07T19:09:06.448-04:00Interesting premise, can well imagine your hero wi...Interesting premise, can well imagine your hero will have a LOT to get used to on Earth. Terrific snippet!Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2126211012590839823.post-4618401392913904172013-04-07T16:03:28.932-04:002013-04-07T16:03:28.932-04:00I'd think that kissing an alien would be parti...I'd think that kissing an alien would be particularly nervy. :-) Fun snippet, Debra. Karysa Fairehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09519776785650008126noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2126211012590839823.post-90244476190103069252013-04-07T12:16:41.939-04:002013-04-07T12:16:41.939-04:00The POV can be streamlined a bit more, but I like ...The POV can be streamlined a bit more, but I like the feel of this excerpt, and the characterization. You're on the right track with this one :)Zee Monodeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03709226882459365836noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2126211012590839823.post-42182759185246704642013-04-07T11:25:26.994-04:002013-04-07T11:25:26.994-04:00I'm a little confused with the change in verb ...I'm a little confused with the change in verb tense halfway through. It took me a few times re-reading to understand what you were saying. I like the truth in the last sentence.<br /><br /><br />Anastasia VitskyAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com