From Old Dreams-
Her knees grew weak as he pulled her closer, wrapping his arms firmly around her until their bodies touched from their chests down to their knees.
His lips continued to brush tantalizingly over hers as he spoke. “I’m so glad you chose to stay with me. I love you Colleen.”
Arlene pulled back sharply, placing a hand firmly on his chest as she looked up at him in confusion. “I’m Arlene, remember? Whose Colleen, Brian?” She grabbed his arm and softly shook him. “Whose Colleen?”
Brian pulled her back into his arms with a sweet smile and whispered, “My wife."
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Now there's a mood killer! Good job!
ReplyDeleteOh dear, NOT what a woman wants to hear! Excellent excerpt!
ReplyDeleteThanks guys. I couldn't help writing that one when it came to mind. One harsh kill in the guts if you ask me! :)
ReplyDeleteOh, great, not only is he calling her by the wrong name, it's his WIFE'S name. Smack, slap, and slam!
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