Saturday, May 25, 2013

Snippet Sunday With Some Brotherly Love

  In my book His Kiss my hero makes a mistake with his best friend Amber that could end up costing them their friendship. To make matters worse as he starts to have feelings for her another man pops in to steal her, his older brother Jonas. Today's snippet shows a small taste of how Taylor feels after seeing his brother flirt with Amber.

From His Kiss-
  Taylor dragged Jonas out into the street and shoved him against his own work truck. "Look there are a million girls in the world, can't you just go find one of them and leave my Amber alone?"

  "Your Amber? I don't see a ring on her finger baby brother." Jonas grinned snottily.

  "Don't screw with me Jonas. You have messed around with every girlfriend I have ever had except for Janet."

  "That's cause Janet may be small, but she's one big bitch bro."


To read the rest of this excerpt and buy a copy of the book go here to- New Concepts Publishing

Have you and a sibling ever had a fight over a could be lover?


  1. Hmmm . . . interesting brotherly dynamic.

    Is Jonas that much of a jealous ass, or is he trying to test Taylor's dates?

  2. Why would Jonas try to get all of Taylor's girlfriend can't he get one by himself?
    I like how he calls him "baby brother", he seems to have a lot of issues.

  3. What an ass! Hopefully Amber is smart enough to see this. And then run. Far, far away. At least from Jonas. ;-)

  4. Wow, what a tense family dynamic! The emotion really came through in the snippet and i'm hooked!

  5. No mistaking how he feels about it. I can relate. My teen has a friend like that. It's just a game of I want what you have or see how easy I can take it away. Great snippet!
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  6. Nasty dynamic, but rings true. There are people who just want to make trouble. Nicely done.